I am a year 7 learner at St. Pius X Catholic School in Auckland, New Zealand and my teachers are Mrs Tui and Mrs Lauchlan.
Thursday, 28 May 2020
Friday 29 May Writing
The Basic Story Outline
The best way to structure a newspaper article is to first write an outline. Review your research and notes. Then jot down ideas for the following six sections. Remember, this is just a foundation upon which to build your story.
Title.
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Pentecost-Holy Spirit.
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Article Auckland Airport runway shortened.
Worlds largest Hail Stone Confirmed
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I. Lead sentence
Grab and hook your reader right away.
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Middle aged men articulate
in languages they could not speak before. But not a soul of the crowd believed them.
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Leitupo: Auckland Airport shortened One Km from the Airplane repairing panel breaks on the runway.
Lukas: Scientists have found the largest Hailstone in Argentina 2 Years ago.
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II. Introduction
Which facts and figures will ground your story? You have to tell your readers where and when this story is happening
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The pentecost was after the ascension the disciples were hiding from the Roman Empire
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Lukas: In Argentina scientists have found the largest hail stone. 23.6cm in diameter. Scientists think that it's not the largest and there might be bigger ones.
Leitupo: At the airport the Government said to the construction site people can start early and make the runway shortened and they had to use 280 concrete slabs.
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III. Opening quotation
What will give the reader a sense of the people involved and what they are thinking?
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The people heard that they were cut to the heart, and said to Peter and the rest of the apostles, “Brothers, what shall we do?
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Leitupo: I heard some random noise come from that house that I am standing next to right now. I can hear it and so Here they come out speaking in a language we’ve never heard before.
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IV. Main body
What is at the heart of your story?
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The holy spirit. Pentecost day.
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V. Closing quotation
Find something that sums the article up in a few words.
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All of them were filled with the Holy Spirit
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VI. Conclusion (optional—the closing quote may do the job)
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People did what Peter and apostles gave them.
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Thursday, 21 May 2020
Thursday, 14 May 2020
Friday 15 May Writing
Should Plastic bags be Banned?
Yes I think plastic bags should be banned. Plastic bags are very bad for our
environment. Plastic bags are very harmful for our water creatures and other
animals. Plastic bags are not naturally made which takes 100 years or more to
decompose. People should use reusable shopping bags instead. That's why I
think we should just ban plastic bags. I have been motivated to write about this
issue and problem because I love sea turtles and other creatures. Don’t you
see plastic bags blowing around your house or other places? This is a very big
issue so we should solve it to protect our ecosystem.
environment. Plastic bags are very harmful for our water creatures and other
animals. Plastic bags are not naturally made which takes 100 years or more to
decompose. People should use reusable shopping bags instead. That's why I
think we should just ban plastic bags. I have been motivated to write about this
issue and problem because I love sea turtles and other creatures. Don’t you
see plastic bags blowing around your house or other places? This is a very big
issue so we should solve it to protect our ecosystem.
Thursday, 7 May 2020
Friday 8 May 2020 Writing
My Algorthm Slide.
This week for Writing we have been working on what Algorithm is and steps to make or do something.
We also have been do some coding.
This week for Writing we have been working on what Algorithm is and steps to make or do something.
We also have been do some coding.
Wednesday, 6 May 2020
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